Hansha Teki - Failed Haiku 4

Failed Haiku 4

an old oak

an old oak

turns in its own way

I in mine
autumn rain

autumn rain . . .

I write myself out

of my haiku
on edge

on edge

my pen tip at odds

with my words
snapped

snapped

in a selfie

me no more
until her smile

until her smile

just a universe

becoming